G3, the second discussion, SL

[18:32] Ruby Lysios: can we discuss here?
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: Let's start here
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: good
[18:32] Ding Atolia: is is ok here?
[18:32] Ding Atolia: it
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: great place
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: ding,come
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: let's get started
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: the first round, who will be the writer, reader, editor, ond organizer?
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: let's stand closer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:33] Susie223 Chun: I will be the editor?
[18:33] Ding Atolia: reader
[18:33] Ding Atolia: or orgnizer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok, let tkake turns
[18:34] Ruby Lysios: take
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Who will show me her story first?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Jessie?or Ruby?
[18:34] Ding Atolia: this round, Sun-editor, Ruby-writer, Jessie-reader, ok?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: ok
[18:35] Jessie Passerine: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: me-or
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: deal
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: so we should talk about Ruby's story?
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: let me check it
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: so i need to tell the story
[18:35] Ding Atolia: ye
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: well
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: I have read your stories last night
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: do you go to my blog to see the article or i need to tell the story again?
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: ha, thanks
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: i change my topic
[18:36] Ding Atolia: you changed?
[18:36] Ding Atolia: I haven't read your new one
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: Ruby,I think there are some grammar mistake
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:37] Ding Atolia: could you give me your blog ad
[18:37] Ding Atolia: adress
[18:37] Susie223 Chun: Is that about immigrant brides
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: my title is sadness and sorrow toward new taiwan brides
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: bingo
[18:38] Ruby Lysios: http://monkeyyaya.blogspot.com
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: so I read the right story,haha
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: well ,the first mistake
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: "Coming from Vietnam"
[18:40] Susie223 Chun: I think you should use, but not . before the sentence
[18:40] Ding Atolia: I saw my child laughing at me… should be smiling at?
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[18:41] Susie223 Chun: So it should be .....in Taiwan, coming from.....
[18:41] Susie223 Chun: the green words are annoying...
[18:41] Ruby Lysios: can you revise the whole sentence for me, cause i don;t quite understand
[18:42] Ding Atolia: so these women, their husbands are not living?
[18:42] Susie223 Chun: there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan. Coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: ok, i know your meaning, thanks:)
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: I think it should be:there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan, coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: greT
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: i see !
[18:43] Ding Atolia: my question...
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: not at all
[18:44] Ding Atolia: but they come to TW alone or with kids?
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: but maybe some of there husband are dead,maybe some have them have divorce
[18:45] Jessie Passerine: I don't quite understand from the passage why they are sad..
[18:45] Ruby Lysios: they maried to taiwanese, and they born kids here
[18:45] Ding Atolia: oo
[18:46] Ding Atolia: so they have families
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: new family in taiwan
[18:46] Susie223 Chun 大喊: there are still many helpless migrant brides in the difficult situation that need more people concern such as the education of their child, domestic violence, and racial discrimination
[18:46] Ding Atolia: then why are they so sad and need more attention
[18:46] Ding Atolia: ?
[18:46] Susie223 Chun: concern problems such as...
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: ok take yu hua for example
[18:47] Ding Atolia: ok
[18:47] Ruby Lysios: he husband is dead and her child is a autistic child
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: We hope our society could be more fair and exists justice to deal with the issues;
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: exsist
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: cos there's "could" bedore
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: before
[18:48] Ding Atolia: what does autistic mean?
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i don't know the word, sorry
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: like a shy kid
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i c
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: he doesn't like to talk to anyoune
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: anyone
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: but I saw my child laughing at me
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: smiling at will be better
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: I think
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: it seems a smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: We could help comfort their minds to support the migrant brides and wish to see there smiles every day
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: their smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: sorry
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: not thereXD
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: ha ha
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: thanks
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: ok,my task is finished
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: so...the reader?
[18:50] Ding Atolia: her computer is kind of stuck
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[18:51] Susie223 Chun: ok,let's wait
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: 30 minutes for each story
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: according to Shinn's plan
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: do you think anything strange or illogical in my story ?
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: yes
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: 8 miniutes left
[18:52] Susie223 Chun: Are the brides single?
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: I didn't figure out that before ding asked the question
[18:53] Ruby Lysios: they are not single because they married to taiwanese
[18:53] Jessie Passerine: my computer is still slow but I ;ll try
[18:53] Ding Atolia: generally, the ognization of your story is good
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: take it easy,J
[18:53] Ding Atolia: gereral-specific examples-general
[18:54] Susie223 Chun: I think it's an interesting story
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: there are still so many examples...but not all brides are not unhappy
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: some of them still have a happy life in taiwan and her husband is nice to her
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: after reading the whole story I'm impressed by the situation of migrants in taiwan
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: it depends
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: it's a good story
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: it seems they are minor group in taiwan
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: need more love and care
[18:56] Jessie Passerine: I think I'm learningmore from your narratation
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: because they leave their country to make a living in taiwan
[18:56] Ding Atolia: but i think the background is not that clear, basically, they seem not Taiwan bride, but bride who are left alone and come to Tw, but still suffer
[18:57] Ding Atolia: maybe you should work more on your background information
[18:57] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: just make it clearer
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: and will be better
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: should i say new brides in taiwan or foreign brides in taiwan?
[18:58] Ding Atolia: maybe foreign bride coming to Tw?
[18:58] Susie223 Chun: foreign isn't that proper,I think:)
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: because i think they are not foreign anymore
[18:58] Ding Atolia: but why are they brides, why not widows, haha]
[18:59] Ruby Lysios: because not all brides are widows
[18:59] Ding Atolia: widow sounds so rude
[18:59] Susie223 Chun: that's true
[18:59] Ding Atolia: may be you can say single mother coming to tw
[18:59] Jessie Passerine: what a want to know more are the examples about education of their child,domestic violenceand racial discrimination
[19:00] Ding Atolia: some of them have a family
[19:00] Ding Atolia: but most of them is still in suffering
[19:00] Susie223 Chun: time is up,guys
[19:00] Ruby Lysios: ok thanks
[19:00] Ding Atolia: yes, talk more about the present suffering they have, not just general
[19:01] Ding Atolia: ok, let's take turns
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[19:01] Ding Atolia: let's talk about my story
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:01] Ding Atolia: have you read that, all
[19:01] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:01] Ding Atolia: who will be the editor this time?
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: so
[19:01] Jessie Passerine: who's the editor and who's the reader?
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: this time I'll be the reader
[19:02] Ruby Lysios: i could be the editor
[19:02] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:02] Ding Atolia: J, youwill be og
[19:02] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:03] Ding Atolia: i think my story is too personal
[19:04] Ding Atolia: sonny5258.blogspot.com
[19:04] Susie223 Chun: What is Jujube ?
[19:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: zao
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: what's jujube
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: ?
[19:05] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: 青枣
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: oh, i see
[19:05] Ding Atolia: hah
[19:05] Ding Atolia: it's delicious
[19:07] Susie223 Chun: well, it's a good story,but it's not a news.:)
[19:07] Ruby Lysios: yes...
[19:07] Ding Atolia: yes
[19:08] Ding Atolia: i am aware of that, it's too personal
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: i don't know; will news should be formal?
[19:08] Ding Atolia: but i thought we could just write that
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: like your diary
[19:08] Susie223 Chun: actually,no...
[19:08] Ding Atolia: like the dogs in ncu campus
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: hum...
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: after all, you can't post this kind of stories on newspapers
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: magazines will be ok
[19:09] Ding Atolia: so we have to use a story to reveal some social aspects?
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: but you should report something, and people could not get the point what you try to say to us
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:10] Ding Atolia: good point, ok ,i see
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: not only social event
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: it's better to say the topic at the beginning
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: but it shouldn't be so persona;
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: l
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[19:11] Susie223 Chun: it's a dairy story,not a news story
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: i know, at the beginnig, you could say taiwanese are nice, haha
[19:11] Jessie Passerine: well though it's not a piece of news ,but it's a good story
[19:11] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: and try to say something support your idea
[19:11] Ding Atolia: haha, yes
[19:11] Ding Atolia: it could be like this
[19:12] Ding Atolia: the first time i came here, i find the people here so nice
[19:12] Ding Atolia: and then i use my story to prove it
[19:12] Ding Atolia: then i could talk about some culture difference
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: yeah
[19:12] Ding Atolia: how differently nice between tw and mainland peole
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: differences will be more attractive
[19:13] Jessie Passerine: hey it's ten now shouldn't we be going to CNN iReport Island now?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: no
[19:13] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: did you see the plan?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: we have two hous here
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: OK~
[19:13] Ding Atolia: maybe what's the unique side of the two
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: think about it
[19:14] Ding Atolia: to make it in a broader sense
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: when you come back home
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: your friend will be more interested in the diferejces\
[19:14] Jessie Passerine: ok~ what i saw is for last time
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: differences
[19:15] Ding Atolia: yes, i see
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: i just find one punctuation error
[19:15] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body, the former for bringing a breeze in that burning weather, and the latter for bringing a comfort for my homesick heart.
[19:15] Ding Atolia: the first,
[19:16] Ding Atolia: should be:
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body :
[19:16] Ding Atolia: right?
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: ;
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, got it ,thanks
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: i like some of your terms
[19:16] Susie223 Chun: Ruby...
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: like "embrace your soul"
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, thanx
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: there's another mistake in your story
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: I mean ,in Ruby's,you remind me just now
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: oh, thanks
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: what
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: Hopefully we could try our best to let them feel Taiwan people’s warm and friendliness.
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warth
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warmth
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: feel TW people's warmth?I think
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: oh!
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: warm is adj
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: ok ,let's continue
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: editor?
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: any other mistakes?
[19:19] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: great
[19:20] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with mine?
[19:20] Susie223 Chun: well ,we still have ten minute for Ding
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: The dogs running or lying on campus; the little squirrel enjoying eating under a little pine tree; the helpful and friendly teachers and students… all these images distract me from the thought that I’m so far away from home.
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: maybe you could just use , , ,
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: because it's not a sentence
[19:21] Ding Atolia: you mean the; can be changed to ,
[19:21] Ding Atolia: right?
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[19:21] Ding Atolia: Ruby?
[19:21] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:21] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:22] Ding Atolia: by the way, since we have a little time
[19:22] Ding Atolia: should we edit this story and re-post it?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: need a break?
[19:22] Ding Atolia: or anything else we should do?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: that'll be fine
[19:22] Ruby Lysios: a revision
[19:23] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: the teacher had posted in the class blog
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: wanna a break
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: haha
[19:23] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:24] Ding Atolia: ok, let's be back here at 10:30
[19:24] Susie223 Chun: so let's meet 6minutes later
[19:24] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:29] Susie223 Chun: so I will be the next writer
[19:30] Susie223 Chun: don't forget to save snapshots and discussion records guys:)
[19:30] Ding Atolia: let's take some snapshots here
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[19:31] Susie223 Chun: Time is up
[19:31] Susie223 Chun: let's back to work
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: guys?
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: hi
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: i wake up
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: J?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: haha
[19:32] Ding Atolia: how do i make my screen lighter?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: http://sunnyolive.blogspot.com/2010/03/brought-by-draft-resolution.html
[19:32] Jessie Passerine: here
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: my story address
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: who will be the reder,editor and og?
[19:33] Ding Atolia: i am the editor
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: so Ruby will be the reader?
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: cos we should take different roles each time
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:34] Jessie Passerine: i'm the editor ding's the reader
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: so i will be reader this time?
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: or og\
[19:35] Jessie Passerine: and ruby the or
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: let's start
[19:35] Ding Atolia: ok, i will be reader
[19:35] Ding Atolia: and J is editor
[19:36] Jessie Passerine: ok . there's a grammer mistake in p1
[19:36] Susie223 Chun 大喊: ?
[19:37] Jessie Passerine: "said by " maybe dropping by would be more proper
[19:37] Susie223 Chun: why is there a大喊?
[19:38] Jessie Passerine: properer
[19:38] Susie223 Chun: I don't think it's a grammar mistake...
[19:39] Ding Atolia: maybe we use just said more common in report
[19:40] Jessie Passerine: yes i meant that
[19:41] Susie223 Chun: ok
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[19:42] Jessie Passerine: The document showed that the Taipei Municipal Government treated queers as epidemic virus, that’s why they were so angry.
[19:42] Jessie Passerine: and that's why
[19:43] Jessie Passerine: or the comma would be connecting two simple sentences
[19:43] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:44] Susie223 Chun: why is the screen so dark?
[19:44] Ding Atolia: i am wondering too
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: any other miskates?
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: 15minutes left
[19:45] Ruby Lysios: world environment setting
[19:46] Ruby Lysios: could be brighter
[19:46] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:47] Jessie Passerine: I found the translation of 教育局 on the website of taipei government
[19:47] Ding Atolia: as a reader, i get much information fro your story
[19:47] Ding Atolia: from
[19:48] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:48] Jessie Passerine: it's Departmnet of Education
[19:48] Ding Atolia: it's pretty complete
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: I thought department isn't for a city's government, but for a country
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: well ,I see,thank you
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[19:52] Jessie Passerine: what about the term " New York City Department of Education"
[19:53] Jessie Passerine: It's also for a city
[19:53] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:55] Susie223 Chun: 5 minutes left
[19:55] Ruby Lysios: well...
[19:56] Susie223 Chun: Ruby?any opinions?
[19:57] Jessie Passerine: In the next school year, relational content will appear in the textbooks. I think using the word relevant instead of relaional will be better.
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: i think what you wite is very objective and without your personal feeling
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: that's good
[19:59] Susie223 Chun: thanks
[19:59] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with this one?
[19:59] Jessie Passerine: done
[20:00] Ding Atolia: ok, let's move to J's
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:00] Ding Atolia: give us the blog ad
[20:00] Jessie Passerine: http://jessieelsewhere.blogspot.com/
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: this time i'll be reader
[20:00] Ding Atolia: i will be editor?
[20:00] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:01] Susie223 Chun: so i'm the og
[20:01] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[20:01] Ruby Lysios: what a short news
[20:01] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:01] Ding Atolia: concise
[20:01] Ding Atolia: does anyone knows...
[20:01] Ruby Lysios: but ithe topic is clear
[20:01] Ding Atolia: that's a big mistake
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: i also find out that
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: haha..I don't know what else word to write.. the story itself is short
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: what mistake?
[20:02] Ding Atolia: does anyone know
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: but after reading the news, i got no idea....
[20:03] Jessie Passerine: a
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: what do you want to convey
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: the worried parent?
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: yes
[20:04] Ding Atolia: fail to do something: fail to reach his son
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about the missing child
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: too worried
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: a little bit too worried
[20:04] Ding Atolia: tried dailing should be try to dail
[20:05] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:05] Ding Atolia: or you can just say tried to call his som
[20:05] Ding Atolia: son
[20:05] Ding Atolia: dail one phone is not commonly used
[20:06] Ruby Lysios: in the discussion, his son "joined" before was asked the question?
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: was the quik reponse
[20:06] Ding Atolia: a few spell mistakes
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: quick
[20:06] Jessie Passerine: discussion group his son jioned before
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: before he was asked the question
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: jion??
[20:07] Jessie Passerine: haha.. join..
[20:07] Susie223 Chun 大喊: after being told by a friend that his father was searching him online.
[20:08] Susie223 Chun: searching for
[20:08] Ding Atolia: i think the story is too simple
[20:08] Jessie Passerine: why are you shouting..
[20:08] Ding Atolia: maybe as an exchange student yourself
[20:09] Ding Atolia: you can talk more about your self-feeling when you experienced the earthquake
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: maybe i would like to know more details
[20:09] Ding Atolia: and whether your parents worry a lot
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: the missing child's feeling
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: I don't know why is the character shouting
[20:10] Ding Atolia: then go further to talk more on space and relationship: though we are far away from home, our parents are always concerned about us
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: maybe I pressed something
[20:10] Jessie Passerine: ding ,in news the writer does not talk about him or herself.
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: haha...
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: dinf is missing home
[20:11] Ruby Lysios: ding
[20:11] Ding Atolia: ok, not herself, but as a group of exchange student
[20:11] Susie223 Chun: I agreed with J
[20:11] Ding Atolia: haha
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[20:12] Jessie Passerine: maybe i'll add a few comments from other people
[20:12] Ruby Lysios: “No one got hurt here.”was the quik reponse quick response
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: that's would be better
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: add some coments
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: comments
[20:13] Susie223 Chun: I have figured out that just now,haha
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: haha..
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: my spellings..
[20:13] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: so ,the story should be more detalied>?
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: detailed?
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: do you parents also use qq??
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: that's cool
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:14] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: yes they both do
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: they also use facebook
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: cool!
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: and douban
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: really!!!
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: to see what am I doing everyday
[20:15] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: and when do I go to bed everyday
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: in case I sleep too late,haha
[20:15] Jessie Passerine: what about your parents ruby?
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: they can't use computer....
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: my dad's job has no relation to computers
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: and he doesn't want to learn
[20:17] Ruby Lysios: he just watches tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: o, hehe
[20:17] Ding Atolia: i like watch tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: too
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: well,that's normal
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: my parents are unnormal XD
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: s, do you feel under great pressure because of theri supervision?
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: their
[20:19] Ruby Lysios: hi, ta
[20:19] JTA Karsin: hey
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: sometimes a little bit
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: hi~
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: hey~
[20:20] Ding Atolia: hi
[20:20] JTA Karsin: something wrong?
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: we have finished,I think
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: no~
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: jes
[20:20] JTA Karsin: oh ok haha
[20:20] JTA Karsin: Hey!
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: what else are we supposed todo?
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: ask TA
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: what should we do now?
[20:21] JTA Karsin: you finished your discussion?
[20:21] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:21] Ruby Lysios: almost
[20:21] Ding Atolia: yes
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[20:21] Susie223 Chun: TA?
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: can we leave earlier, haha
[20:22] JTA Karsin: i guess if the discussion is over you can go now
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: oh yeah!!!
[20:22] JTA Karsin: but remember to mail emma your transcript
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: great
[20:22] JTA Karsin: hey wait
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: okok
[20:22] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: ok
[20:22] Ding Atolia: ok