2010年3月23日星期二
G3, the second discussion, SL
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: can we discuss here?
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: Let's start here
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: good
[18:32] Ding Atolia: is is ok here?
[18:32] Ding Atolia: it
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: great place
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: ding,come
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: let's get started
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: the first round, who will be the writer, reader, editor, ond organizer?
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: let's stand closer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:33] Susie223 Chun: I will be the editor?
[18:33] Ding Atolia: reader
[18:33] Ding Atolia: or orgnizer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok, let tkake turns
[18:34] Ruby Lysios: take
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Who will show me her story first?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Jessie?or Ruby?
[18:34] Ding Atolia: this round, Sun-editor, Ruby-writer, Jessie-reader, ok?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: ok
[18:35] Jessie Passerine: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: me-or
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: deal
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: so we should talk about Ruby's story?
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: let me check it
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: so i need to tell the story
[18:35] Ding Atolia: ye
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: well
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: I have read your stories last night
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: do you go to my blog to see the article or i need to tell the story again?
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: ha, thanks
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: i change my topic
[18:36] Ding Atolia: you changed?
[18:36] Ding Atolia: I haven't read your new one
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: Ruby,I think there are some grammar mistake
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:37] Ding Atolia: could you give me your blog ad
[18:37] Ding Atolia: adress
[18:37] Susie223 Chun: Is that about immigrant brides
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: my title is sadness and sorrow toward new taiwan brides
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: bingo
[18:38] Ruby Lysios: http://monkeyyaya.blogspot.com
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: so I read the right story,haha
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: well ,the first mistake
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: "Coming from Vietnam"
[18:40] Susie223 Chun: I think you should use, but not . before the sentence
[18:40] Ding Atolia: I saw my child laughing at me… should be smiling at?
[18:41] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[18:41] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... J.
[18:41] Susie223 Chun: So it should be .....in Taiwan, coming from.....
[18:41] Susie223 Chun: the green words are annoying...
[18:41] Ruby Lysios: can you revise the whole sentence for me, cause i don;t quite understand
[18:42] Ding Atolia: so these women, their husbands are not living?
[18:42] Susie223 Chun: there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan. Coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: ok, i know your meaning, thanks:)
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: I think it should be:there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan, coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: greT
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: i see !
[18:43] Ding Atolia: my question...
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: not at all
[18:44] Ding Atolia: but they come to TW alone or with kids?
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: but maybe some of there husband are dead,maybe some have them have divorce
[18:45] Jessie Passerine: I don't quite understand from the passage why they are sad..
[18:45] Ruby Lysios: they maried to taiwanese, and they born kids here
[18:45] Ding Atolia: oo
[18:46] Ding Atolia: so they have families
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: new family in taiwan
[18:46] Susie223 Chun 大喊: there are still many helpless migrant brides in the difficult situation that need more people concern such as the education of their child, domestic violence, and racial discrimination
[18:46] Ding Atolia: then why are they so sad and need more attention
[18:46] Ding Atolia: ?
[18:46] Susie223 Chun: concern problems such as...
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: ok take yu hua for example
[18:47] Ding Atolia: ok
[18:47] Ruby Lysios: he husband is dead and her child is a autistic child
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: We hope our society could be more fair and exists justice to deal with the issues;
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: exsist
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: cos there's "could" bedore
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: before
[18:48] Ding Atolia: what does autistic mean?
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i don't know the word, sorry
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: like a shy kid
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i c
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: he doesn't like to talk to anyoune
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: anyone
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: but I saw my child laughing at me
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: smiling at will be better
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: I think
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: it seems a smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: We could help comfort their minds to support the migrant brides and wish to see there smiles every day
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: their smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: sorry
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: not thereXD
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: ha ha
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: thanks
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: ok,my task is finished
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: so...the reader?
[18:50] Ding Atolia: her computer is kind of stuck
[18:51] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[18:51] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[18:51] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... B.
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: ok,let's wait
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: 30 minutes for each story
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: according to Shinn's plan
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: do you think anything strange or illogical in my story ?
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: yes
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: 8 miniutes left
[18:52] Susie223 Chun: Are the brides single?
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: I didn't figure out that before ding asked the question
[18:53] Ruby Lysios: they are not single because they married to taiwanese
[18:53] Jessie Passerine: my computer is still slow but I ;ll try
[18:53] Ding Atolia: generally, the ognization of your story is good
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: take it easy,J
[18:53] Ding Atolia: gereral-specific examples-general
[18:54] Susie223 Chun: I think it's an interesting story
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: there are still so many examples...but not all brides are not unhappy
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: some of them still have a happy life in taiwan and her husband is nice to her
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: after reading the whole story I'm impressed by the situation of migrants in taiwan
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: it depends
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: it's a good story
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: it seems they are minor group in taiwan
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: need more love and care
[18:56] Jessie Passerine: I think I'm learningmore from your narratation
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: because they leave their country to make a living in taiwan
[18:56] Ding Atolia: but i think the background is not that clear, basically, they seem not Taiwan bride, but bride who are left alone and come to Tw, but still suffer
[18:57] Ding Atolia: maybe you should work more on your background information
[18:57] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: just make it clearer
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: and will be better
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: should i say new brides in taiwan or foreign brides in taiwan?
[18:58] Ding Atolia: maybe foreign bride coming to Tw?
[18:58] Susie223 Chun: foreign isn't that proper,I think:)
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: because i think they are not foreign anymore
[18:58] Ding Atolia: but why are they brides, why not widows, haha]
[18:59] Ruby Lysios: because not all brides are widows
[18:59] Ding Atolia: widow sounds so rude
[18:59] Susie223 Chun: that's true
[18:59] Ding Atolia: may be you can say single mother coming to tw
[18:59] Jessie Passerine: what a want to know more are the examples about education of their child,domestic violenceand racial discrimination
[19:00] Ding Atolia: some of them have a family
[19:00] Ding Atolia: but most of them is still in suffering
[19:00] Susie223 Chun: time is up,guys
[19:00] Ruby Lysios: ok thanks
[19:00] Ding Atolia: yes, talk more about the present suffering they have, not just general
[19:01] Ding Atolia: ok, let's take turns
[19:01] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:01] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:01] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... I.
[19:01] Ding Atolia: let's talk about my story
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:01] Ding Atolia: have you read that, all
[19:01] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:01] Ding Atolia: who will be the editor this time?
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: so
[19:01] Jessie Passerine: who's the editor and who's the reader?
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: this time I'll be the reader
[19:02] Ruby Lysios: i could be the editor
[19:02] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:02] Ding Atolia: J, youwill be og
[19:02] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:03] Ding Atolia: i think my story is too personal
[19:04] Ding Atolia: sonny5258.blogspot.com
[19:04] Susie223 Chun: What is Jujube ?
[19:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: zao
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: what's jujube
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: ?
[19:05] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: 青枣
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: oh, i see
[19:05] Ding Atolia: hah
[19:05] Ding Atolia: it's delicious
[19:07] Susie223 Chun: well, it's a good story,but it's not a news.:)
[19:07] Ruby Lysios: yes...
[19:07] Ding Atolia: yes
[19:08] Ding Atolia: i am aware of that, it's too personal
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: i don't know; will news should be formal?
[19:08] Ding Atolia: but i thought we could just write that
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: like your diary
[19:08] Susie223 Chun: actually,no...
[19:08] Ding Atolia: like the dogs in ncu campus
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: hum...
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: after all, you can't post this kind of stories on newspapers
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: magazines will be ok
[19:09] Ding Atolia: so we have to use a story to reveal some social aspects?
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: but you should report something, and people could not get the point what you try to say to us
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:10] Ding Atolia: good point, ok ,i see
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: not only social event
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: it's better to say the topic at the beginning
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: but it shouldn't be so persona;
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: l
[19:11] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:11] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:11] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... J.
[19:11] Susie223 Chun: it's a dairy story,not a news story
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: i know, at the beginnig, you could say taiwanese are nice, haha
[19:11] Jessie Passerine: well though it's not a piece of news ,but it's a good story
[19:11] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: and try to say something support your idea
[19:11] Ding Atolia: haha, yes
[19:11] Ding Atolia: it could be like this
[19:12] Ding Atolia: the first time i came here, i find the people here so nice
[19:12] Ding Atolia: and then i use my story to prove it
[19:12] Ding Atolia: then i could talk about some culture difference
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: yeah
[19:12] Ding Atolia: how differently nice between tw and mainland peole
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: differences will be more attractive
[19:13] Jessie Passerine: hey it's ten now shouldn't we be going to CNN iReport Island now?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: no
[19:13] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: did you see the plan?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: we have two hous here
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: OK~
[19:13] Ding Atolia: maybe what's the unique side of the two
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: think about it
[19:14] Ding Atolia: to make it in a broader sense
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: when you come back home
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: your friend will be more interested in the diferejces\
[19:14] Jessie Passerine: ok~ what i saw is for last time
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: differences
[19:15] Ding Atolia: yes, i see
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: i just find one punctuation error
[19:15] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body, the former for bringing a breeze in that burning weather, and the latter for bringing a comfort for my homesick heart.
[19:15] Ding Atolia: the first,
[19:16] Ding Atolia: should be:
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body :
[19:16] Ding Atolia: right?
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: ;
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, got it ,thanks
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: i like some of your terms
[19:16] Susie223 Chun: Ruby...
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: like "embrace your soul"
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, thanx
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: there's another mistake in your story
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: I mean ,in Ruby's,you remind me just now
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: oh, thanks
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: what
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: Hopefully we could try our best to let them feel Taiwan people’s warm and friendliness.
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warth
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warmth
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: feel TW people's warmth?I think
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: oh!
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: warm is adj
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: ok ,let's continue
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: editor?
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: any other mistakes?
[19:19] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: great
[19:20] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with mine?
[19:20] Susie223 Chun: well ,we still have ten minute for Ding
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: The dogs running or lying on campus; the little squirrel enjoying eating under a little pine tree; the helpful and friendly teachers and students… all these images distract me from the thought that I’m so far away from home.
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: maybe you could just use , , ,
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: because it's not a sentence
[19:21] Ding Atolia: you mean the; can be changed to ,
[19:21] Ding Atolia: right?
[19:21] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:21] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:21] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... X.
[19:21] Ding Atolia: Ruby?
[19:21] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:21] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:22] Ding Atolia: by the way, since we have a little time
[19:22] Ding Atolia: should we edit this story and re-post it?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: need a break?
[19:22] Ding Atolia: or anything else we should do?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: that'll be fine
[19:22] Ruby Lysios: a revision
[19:23] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: the teacher had posted in the class blog
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: wanna a break
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: haha
[19:23] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:24] Ding Atolia: ok, let's be back here at 10:30
[19:24] Susie223 Chun: so let's meet 6minutes later
[19:24] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:29] Susie223 Chun: so I will be the next writer
[19:30] Susie223 Chun: don't forget to save snapshots and discussion records guys:)
[19:30] Ding Atolia: let's take some snapshots here
[19:31] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:31] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:31] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... Z.
[19:31] Susie223 Chun: Time is up
[19:31] Susie223 Chun: let's back to work
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: guys?
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: hi
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: i wake up
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: J?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: haha
[19:32] Ding Atolia: how do i make my screen lighter?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: http://sunnyolive.blogspot.com/2010/03/brought-by-draft-resolution.html
[19:32] Jessie Passerine: here
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: my story address
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: who will be the reder,editor and og?
[19:33] Ding Atolia: i am the editor
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: so Ruby will be the reader?
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: cos we should take different roles each time
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:34] Jessie Passerine: i'm the editor ding's the reader
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: so i will be reader this time?
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: or og\
[19:35] Jessie Passerine: and ruby the or
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: let's start
[19:35] Ding Atolia: ok, i will be reader
[19:35] Ding Atolia: and J is editor
[19:36] Jessie Passerine: ok . there's a grammer mistake in p1
[19:36] Susie223 Chun 大喊: ?
[19:37] Jessie Passerine: "said by " maybe dropping by would be more proper
[19:37] Susie223 Chun: why is there a大喊?
[19:38] Jessie Passerine: properer
[19:38] Susie223 Chun: I don't think it's a grammar mistake...
[19:39] Ding Atolia: maybe we use just said more common in report
[19:40] Jessie Passerine: yes i meant that
[19:41] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:41] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:41] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:41] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... V.
[19:42] Jessie Passerine: The document showed that the Taipei Municipal Government treated queers as epidemic virus, that’s why they were so angry.
[19:42] Jessie Passerine: and that's why
[19:43] Jessie Passerine: or the comma would be connecting two simple sentences
[19:43] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:44] Susie223 Chun: why is the screen so dark?
[19:44] Ding Atolia: i am wondering too
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: any other miskates?
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: 15minutes left
[19:45] Ruby Lysios: world environment setting
[19:46] Ruby Lysios: could be brighter
[19:46] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:47] Jessie Passerine: I found the translation of 教育局 on the website of taipei government
[19:47] Ding Atolia: as a reader, i get much information fro your story
[19:47] Ding Atolia: from
[19:48] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:48] Jessie Passerine: it's Departmnet of Education
[19:48] Ding Atolia: it's pretty complete
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: I thought department isn't for a city's government, but for a country
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: well ,I see,thank you
[19:51] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:51] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:51] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... B.
[19:52] Jessie Passerine: what about the term " New York City Department of Education"
[19:53] Jessie Passerine: It's also for a city
[19:53] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:55] Susie223 Chun: 5 minutes left
[19:55] Ruby Lysios: well...
[19:56] Susie223 Chun: Ruby?any opinions?
[19:57] Jessie Passerine: In the next school year, relational content will appear in the textbooks. I think using the word relevant instead of relaional will be better.
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: i think what you wite is very objective and without your personal feeling
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: that's good
[19:59] Susie223 Chun: thanks
[19:59] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with this one?
[19:59] Jessie Passerine: done
[20:00] Ding Atolia: ok, let's move to J's
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:00] Ding Atolia: give us the blog ad
[20:00] Jessie Passerine: http://jessieelsewhere.blogspot.com/
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: this time i'll be reader
[20:00] Ding Atolia: i will be editor?
[20:00] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:01] Susie223 Chun: so i'm the og
[20:01] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[20:01] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[20:01] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... R.
[20:01] Ruby Lysios: what a short news
[20:01] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:01] Ding Atolia: concise
[20:01] Ding Atolia: does anyone knows...
[20:01] Ruby Lysios: but ithe topic is clear
[20:01] Ding Atolia: that's a big mistake
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: i also find out that
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: haha..I don't know what else word to write.. the story itself is short
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: what mistake?
[20:02] Ding Atolia: does anyone know
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: but after reading the news, i got no idea....
[20:03] Jessie Passerine: a
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: what do you want to convey
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: the worried parent?
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: yes
[20:04] Ding Atolia: fail to do something: fail to reach his son
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about the missing child
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: too worried
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: a little bit too worried
[20:04] Ding Atolia: tried dailing should be try to dail
[20:05] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:05] Ding Atolia: or you can just say tried to call his som
[20:05] Ding Atolia: son
[20:05] Ding Atolia: dail one phone is not commonly used
[20:06] Ruby Lysios: in the discussion, his son "joined" before was asked the question?
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: was the quik reponse
[20:06] Ding Atolia: a few spell mistakes
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: quick
[20:06] Jessie Passerine: discussion group his son jioned before
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: before he was asked the question
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: jion??
[20:07] Jessie Passerine: haha.. join..
[20:07] Susie223 Chun 大喊: after being told by a friend that his father was searching him online.
[20:08] Susie223 Chun: searching for
[20:08] Ding Atolia: i think the story is too simple
[20:08] Jessie Passerine: why are you shouting..
[20:08] Ding Atolia: maybe as an exchange student yourself
[20:09] Ding Atolia: you can talk more about your self-feeling when you experienced the earthquake
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: maybe i would like to know more details
[20:09] Ding Atolia: and whether your parents worry a lot
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: the missing child's feeling
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: I don't know why is the character shouting
[20:10] Ding Atolia: then go further to talk more on space and relationship: though we are far away from home, our parents are always concerned about us
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: maybe I pressed something
[20:10] Jessie Passerine: ding ,in news the writer does not talk about him or herself.
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: haha...
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: dinf is missing home
[20:11] Ruby Lysios: ding
[20:11] Ding Atolia: ok, not herself, but as a group of exchange student
[20:11] Susie223 Chun: I agreed with J
[20:11] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:11] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[20:11] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[20:11] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... F.
[20:12] Jessie Passerine: maybe i'll add a few comments from other people
[20:12] Ruby Lysios: “No one got hurt here.”was the quik reponse quick response
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: that's would be better
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: add some coments
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: comments
[20:13] Susie223 Chun: I have figured out that just now,haha
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: haha..
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: my spellings..
[20:13] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: so ,the story should be more detalied>?
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: detailed?
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: do you parents also use qq??
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: that's cool
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:14] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: yes they both do
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: they also use facebook
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: cool!
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: and douban
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: really!!!
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: to see what am I doing everyday
[20:15] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: and when do I go to bed everyday
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: in case I sleep too late,haha
[20:15] Jessie Passerine: what about your parents ruby?
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: they can't use computer....
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: my dad's job has no relation to computers
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: and he doesn't want to learn
[20:17] Ruby Lysios: he just watches tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: o, hehe
[20:17] Ding Atolia: i like watch tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: too
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: well,that's normal
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: my parents are unnormal XD
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: s, do you feel under great pressure because of theri supervision?
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: their
[20:19] Ruby Lysios: hi, ta
[20:19] JTA Karsin: hey
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: sometimes a little bit
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: hi~
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: hey~
[20:20] Ding Atolia: hi
[20:20] JTA Karsin: something wrong?
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: we have finished,I think
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: no~
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: jes
[20:20] JTA Karsin: oh ok haha
[20:20] JTA Karsin: Hey!
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: what else are we supposed todo?
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: ask TA
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: what should we do now?
[20:21] JTA Karsin: you finished your discussion?
[20:21] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:21] Ruby Lysios: almost
[20:21] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:21] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[20:21] Susie223 Chun: TA?
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: can we leave earlier, haha
[20:22] JTA Karsin: i guess if the discussion is over you can go now
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: oh yeah!!!
[20:22] JTA Karsin: but remember to mail emma your transcript
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: great
[20:22] JTA Karsin: hey wait
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: okok
[20:22] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: ok
[20:22] Ding Atolia: ok
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: Let's start here
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: good
[18:32] Ding Atolia: is is ok here?
[18:32] Ding Atolia: it
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: great place
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: ding,come
[18:32] Jessie Passerine: let's get started
[18:32] Ruby Lysios: the first round, who will be the writer, reader, editor, ond organizer?
[18:32] Susie223 Chun: let's stand closer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:33] Susie223 Chun: I will be the editor?
[18:33] Ding Atolia: reader
[18:33] Ding Atolia: or orgnizer
[18:33] Ruby Lysios: ok, let tkake turns
[18:34] Ruby Lysios: take
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Who will show me her story first?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: Jessie?or Ruby?
[18:34] Ding Atolia: this round, Sun-editor, Ruby-writer, Jessie-reader, ok?
[18:34] Susie223 Chun: ok
[18:35] Jessie Passerine: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: me-or
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: deal
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:35] Ding Atolia: so we should talk about Ruby's story?
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: let me check it
[18:35] Ruby Lysios: so i need to tell the story
[18:35] Ding Atolia: ye
[18:35] Susie223 Chun: well
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: I have read your stories last night
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: do you go to my blog to see the article or i need to tell the story again?
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: ha, thanks
[18:36] Ruby Lysios: i change my topic
[18:36] Ding Atolia: you changed?
[18:36] Ding Atolia: I haven't read your new one
[18:36] Susie223 Chun: Ruby,I think there are some grammar mistake
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:37] Ding Atolia: could you give me your blog ad
[18:37] Ding Atolia: adress
[18:37] Susie223 Chun: Is that about immigrant brides
[18:37] Ruby Lysios: my title is sadness and sorrow toward new taiwan brides
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: bingo
[18:38] Ruby Lysios: http://monkeyyaya.blogspot.com
[18:38] Susie223 Chun: so I read the right story,haha
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: well ,the first mistake
[18:39] Susie223 Chun: "Coming from Vietnam"
[18:40] Susie223 Chun: I think you should use, but not . before the sentence
[18:40] Ding Atolia: I saw my child laughing at me… should be smiling at?
[18:41] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[18:41] Susie223 Chun: So it should be .....in Taiwan, coming from.....
[18:41] Susie223 Chun: the green words are annoying...
[18:41] Ruby Lysios: can you revise the whole sentence for me, cause i don;t quite understand
[18:42] Ding Atolia: so these women, their husbands are not living?
[18:42] Susie223 Chun: there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan. Coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: ok, i know your meaning, thanks:)
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: I think it should be:there are more than 400,000 migrant brides in Taiwan, coming from Vietnam, Indonesia, and China
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: greT
[18:43] Susie223 Chun: great
[18:43] Ruby Lysios: i see !
[18:43] Ding Atolia: my question...
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: not at all
[18:44] Ding Atolia: but they come to TW alone or with kids?
[18:44] Ruby Lysios: but maybe some of there husband are dead,maybe some have them have divorce
[18:45] Jessie Passerine: I don't quite understand from the passage why they are sad..
[18:45] Ruby Lysios: they maried to taiwanese, and they born kids here
[18:45] Ding Atolia: oo
[18:46] Ding Atolia: so they have families
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: new family in taiwan
[18:46] Susie223 Chun 大喊: there are still many helpless migrant brides in the difficult situation that need more people concern such as the education of their child, domestic violence, and racial discrimination
[18:46] Ding Atolia: then why are they so sad and need more attention
[18:46] Ding Atolia: ?
[18:46] Susie223 Chun: concern problems such as...
[18:46] Ruby Lysios: ok take yu hua for example
[18:47] Ding Atolia: ok
[18:47] Ruby Lysios: he husband is dead and her child is a autistic child
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: We hope our society could be more fair and exists justice to deal with the issues;
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: exsist
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: cos there's "could" bedore
[18:47] Susie223 Chun: before
[18:48] Ding Atolia: what does autistic mean?
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i don't know the word, sorry
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: like a shy kid
[18:48] Ding Atolia: i c
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: he doesn't like to talk to anyoune
[18:48] Ruby Lysios: anyone
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: but I saw my child laughing at me
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: smiling at will be better
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: I think
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: it seems a smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: We could help comfort their minds to support the migrant brides and wish to see there smiles every day
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: their smile
[18:49] Ruby Lysios: sorry
[18:49] Susie223 Chun: not thereXD
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: ha ha
[18:50] Ruby Lysios: thanks
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: ok,my task is finished
[18:50] Susie223 Chun: so...the reader?
[18:50] Ding Atolia: her computer is kind of stuck
[18:51] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[18:51] Susie223 Chun: ok,let's wait
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: 30 minutes for each story
[18:51] Susie223 Chun: according to Shinn's plan
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: do you think anything strange or illogical in my story ?
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: yes
[18:52] Ruby Lysios: 8 miniutes left
[18:52] Susie223 Chun: Are the brides single?
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: I didn't figure out that before ding asked the question
[18:53] Ruby Lysios: they are not single because they married to taiwanese
[18:53] Jessie Passerine: my computer is still slow but I ;ll try
[18:53] Ding Atolia: generally, the ognization of your story is good
[18:53] Susie223 Chun: take it easy,J
[18:53] Ding Atolia: gereral-specific examples-general
[18:54] Susie223 Chun: I think it's an interesting story
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: there are still so many examples...but not all brides are not unhappy
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: some of them still have a happy life in taiwan and her husband is nice to her
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: after reading the whole story I'm impressed by the situation of migrants in taiwan
[18:55] Ruby Lysios: it depends
[18:55] Jessie Passerine: it's a good story
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: it seems they are minor group in taiwan
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: need more love and care
[18:56] Jessie Passerine: I think I'm learningmore from your narratation
[18:56] Ruby Lysios: because they leave their country to make a living in taiwan
[18:56] Ding Atolia: but i think the background is not that clear, basically, they seem not Taiwan bride, but bride who are left alone and come to Tw, but still suffer
[18:57] Ding Atolia: maybe you should work more on your background information
[18:57] Ruby Lysios: ok
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: just make it clearer
[18:57] Susie223 Chun: and will be better
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: should i say new brides in taiwan or foreign brides in taiwan?
[18:58] Ding Atolia: maybe foreign bride coming to Tw?
[18:58] Susie223 Chun: foreign isn't that proper,I think:)
[18:58] Ruby Lysios: because i think they are not foreign anymore
[18:58] Ding Atolia: but why are they brides, why not widows, haha]
[18:59] Ruby Lysios: because not all brides are widows
[18:59] Ding Atolia: widow sounds so rude
[18:59] Susie223 Chun: that's true
[18:59] Ding Atolia: may be you can say single mother coming to tw
[18:59] Jessie Passerine: what a want to know more are the examples about education of their child,domestic violenceand racial discrimination
[19:00] Ding Atolia: some of them have a family
[19:00] Ding Atolia: but most of them is still in suffering
[19:00] Susie223 Chun: time is up,guys
[19:00] Ruby Lysios: ok thanks
[19:00] Ding Atolia: yes, talk more about the present suffering they have, not just general
[19:01] Ding Atolia: ok, let's take turns
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[19:01] Ding Atolia: let's talk about my story
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:01] Ding Atolia: have you read that, all
[19:01] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:01] Ding Atolia: who will be the editor this time?
[19:01] Susie223 Chun: so
[19:01] Jessie Passerine: who's the editor and who's the reader?
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: this time I'll be the reader
[19:02] Ruby Lysios: i could be the editor
[19:02] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:02] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:02] Ding Atolia: J, youwill be og
[19:02] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:03] Ding Atolia: i think my story is too personal
[19:04] Ding Atolia: sonny5258.blogspot.com
[19:04] Susie223 Chun: What is Jujube ?
[19:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: zao
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: what's jujube
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: ?
[19:05] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:05] Ding Atolia: 青枣
[19:05] Ruby Lysios: oh, i see
[19:05] Ding Atolia: hah
[19:05] Ding Atolia: it's delicious
[19:07] Susie223 Chun: well, it's a good story,but it's not a news.:)
[19:07] Ruby Lysios: yes...
[19:07] Ding Atolia: yes
[19:08] Ding Atolia: i am aware of that, it's too personal
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: i don't know; will news should be formal?
[19:08] Ding Atolia: but i thought we could just write that
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: like your diary
[19:08] Susie223 Chun: actually,no...
[19:08] Ding Atolia: like the dogs in ncu campus
[19:08] Ruby Lysios: hum...
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: after all, you can't post this kind of stories on newspapers
[19:09] Susie223 Chun: magazines will be ok
[19:09] Ding Atolia: so we have to use a story to reveal some social aspects?
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: but you should report something, and people could not get the point what you try to say to us
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:10] Ding Atolia: good point, ok ,i see
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: not only social event
[19:10] Ruby Lysios: it's better to say the topic at the beginning
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: but it shouldn't be so persona;
[19:10] Susie223 Chun: l
[19:11] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[19:11] Susie223 Chun: it's a dairy story,not a news story
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: i know, at the beginnig, you could say taiwanese are nice, haha
[19:11] Jessie Passerine: well though it's not a piece of news ,but it's a good story
[19:11] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:11] Ruby Lysios: and try to say something support your idea
[19:11] Ding Atolia: haha, yes
[19:11] Ding Atolia: it could be like this
[19:12] Ding Atolia: the first time i came here, i find the people here so nice
[19:12] Ding Atolia: and then i use my story to prove it
[19:12] Ding Atolia: then i could talk about some culture difference
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: yeah
[19:12] Ding Atolia: how differently nice between tw and mainland peole
[19:12] Susie223 Chun: differences will be more attractive
[19:13] Jessie Passerine: hey it's ten now shouldn't we be going to CNN iReport Island now?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: no
[19:13] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: did you see the plan?
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: we have two hous here
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: OK~
[19:13] Ding Atolia: maybe what's the unique side of the two
[19:13] Susie223 Chun: yes
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: think about it
[19:14] Ding Atolia: to make it in a broader sense
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: when you come back home
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: your friend will be more interested in the diferejces\
[19:14] Jessie Passerine: ok~ what i saw is for last time
[19:14] Susie223 Chun: differences
[19:15] Ding Atolia: yes, i see
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: i just find one punctuation error
[19:15] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:15] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body, the former for bringing a breeze in that burning weather, and the latter for bringing a comfort for my homesick heart.
[19:15] Ding Atolia: the first,
[19:16] Ding Atolia: should be:
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body :
[19:16] Ding Atolia: right?
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: ;
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, got it ,thanks
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: i like some of your terms
[19:16] Susie223 Chun: Ruby...
[19:16] Ruby Lysios: like "embrace your soul"
[19:16] Ding Atolia: haha, thanx
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: there's another mistake in your story
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: I mean ,in Ruby's,you remind me just now
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: oh, thanks
[19:17] Ruby Lysios: what
[19:17] Susie223 Chun: Hopefully we could try our best to let them feel Taiwan people’s warm and friendliness.
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warth
[19:18] Ding Atolia: warmth
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: feel TW people's warmth?I think
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: oh!
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: warm is adj
[19:18] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:18] Susie223 Chun: ok ,let's continue
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: editor?
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: any other mistakes?
[19:19] Ruby Lysios: no
[19:19] Susie223 Chun: great
[19:20] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with mine?
[19:20] Susie223 Chun: well ,we still have ten minute for Ding
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: The dogs running or lying on campus; the little squirrel enjoying eating under a little pine tree; the helpful and friendly teachers and students… all these images distract me from the thought that I’m so far away from home.
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: maybe you could just use , , ,
[19:20] Ruby Lysios: because it's not a sentence
[19:21] Ding Atolia: you mean the; can be changed to ,
[19:21] Ding Atolia: right?
[19:21] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[19:21] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... X.
[19:21] Ding Atolia: Ruby?
[19:21] Ruby Lysios: yes
[19:21] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:22] Ding Atolia: by the way, since we have a little time
[19:22] Ding Atolia: should we edit this story and re-post it?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: need a break?
[19:22] Ding Atolia: or anything else we should do?
[19:22] Susie223 Chun: that'll be fine
[19:22] Ruby Lysios: a revision
[19:23] Ding Atolia: ok
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: the teacher had posted in the class blog
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: wanna a break
[19:23] Ruby Lysios: haha
[19:23] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:24] Ding Atolia: ok, let's be back here at 10:30
[19:24] Susie223 Chun: so let's meet 6minutes later
[19:24] Jessie Passerine: ok
[19:29] Susie223 Chun: so I will be the next writer
[19:30] Susie223 Chun: don't forget to save snapshots and discussion records guys:)
[19:30] Ding Atolia: let's take some snapshots here
[19:31] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:31] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:31] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... Z.
[19:31] Susie223 Chun: Time is up
[19:31] Susie223 Chun: let's back to work
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: guys?
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: hi
[19:32] Ruby Lysios: i wake up
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: J?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: haha
[19:32] Ding Atolia: how do i make my screen lighter?
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: http://sunnyolive.blogspot.com/2010/03/brought-by-draft-resolution.html
[19:32] Jessie Passerine: here
[19:32] Susie223 Chun: my story address
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: who will be the reder,editor and og?
[19:33] Ding Atolia: i am the editor
[19:33] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: so Ruby will be the reader?
[19:34] Susie223 Chun: cos we should take different roles each time
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:34] Jessie Passerine: i'm the editor ding's the reader
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: so i will be reader this time?
[19:34] Ruby Lysios: or og\
[19:35] Jessie Passerine: and ruby the or
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:35] Ruby Lysios: ok
[19:35] Susie223 Chun: let's start
[19:35] Ding Atolia: ok, i will be reader
[19:35] Ding Atolia: and J is editor
[19:36] Jessie Passerine: ok . there's a grammer mistake in p1
[19:36] Susie223 Chun 大喊: ?
[19:37] Jessie Passerine: "said by " maybe dropping by would be more proper
[19:37] Susie223 Chun: why is there a大喊?
[19:38] Jessie Passerine: properer
[19:38] Susie223 Chun: I don't think it's a grammar mistake...
[19:39] Ding Atolia: maybe we use just said more common in report
[19:40] Jessie Passerine: yes i meant that
[19:41] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:41] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
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[19:41] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... V.
[19:42] Jessie Passerine: The document showed that the Taipei Municipal Government treated queers as epidemic virus, that’s why they were so angry.
[19:42] Jessie Passerine: and that's why
[19:43] Jessie Passerine: or the comma would be connecting two simple sentences
[19:43] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:44] Susie223 Chun: why is the screen so dark?
[19:44] Ding Atolia: i am wondering too
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: any other miskates?
[19:45] Susie223 Chun: 15minutes left
[19:45] Ruby Lysios: world environment setting
[19:46] Ruby Lysios: could be brighter
[19:46] Susie223 Chun: got it
[19:47] Jessie Passerine: I found the translation of 教育局 on the website of taipei government
[19:47] Ding Atolia: as a reader, i get much information fro your story
[19:47] Ding Atolia: from
[19:48] Susie223 Chun: ?
[19:48] Jessie Passerine: it's Departmnet of Education
[19:48] Ding Atolia: it's pretty complete
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: I thought department isn't for a city's government, but for a country
[19:49] Susie223 Chun: well ,I see,thank you
[19:51] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[19:51] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[19:51] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... B.
[19:52] Jessie Passerine: what about the term " New York City Department of Education"
[19:53] Jessie Passerine: It's also for a city
[19:53] Susie223 Chun: ok
[19:55] Susie223 Chun: 5 minutes left
[19:55] Ruby Lysios: well...
[19:56] Susie223 Chun: Ruby?any opinions?
[19:57] Jessie Passerine: In the next school year, relational content will appear in the textbooks. I think using the word relevant instead of relaional will be better.
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: i think what you wite is very objective and without your personal feeling
[19:59] Ruby Lysios: that's good
[19:59] Susie223 Chun: thanks
[19:59] Ding Atolia: ok, so we are done with this one?
[19:59] Jessie Passerine: done
[20:00] Ding Atolia: ok, let's move to J's
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:00] Ding Atolia: give us the blog ad
[20:00] Jessie Passerine: http://jessieelsewhere.blogspot.com/
[20:00] Ruby Lysios: this time i'll be reader
[20:00] Ding Atolia: i will be editor?
[20:00] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:01] Susie223 Chun: so i'm the og
[20:01] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[20:01] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[20:01] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... R.
[20:01] Ruby Lysios: what a short news
[20:01] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:01] Ding Atolia: concise
[20:01] Ding Atolia: does anyone knows...
[20:01] Ruby Lysios: but ithe topic is clear
[20:01] Ding Atolia: that's a big mistake
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:02] Ruby Lysios: i also find out that
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: haha..I don't know what else word to write.. the story itself is short
[20:02] Jessie Passerine: what mistake?
[20:02] Ding Atolia: does anyone know
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: but after reading the news, i got no idea....
[20:03] Jessie Passerine: a
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: what do you want to convey
[20:03] Ruby Lysios: the worried parent?
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: yes
[20:04] Ding Atolia: fail to do something: fail to reach his son
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: i'm also curious about the missing child
[20:04] Jessie Passerine: too worried
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:04] Ruby Lysios: a little bit too worried
[20:04] Ding Atolia: tried dailing should be try to dail
[20:05] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:05] Ding Atolia: or you can just say tried to call his som
[20:05] Ding Atolia: son
[20:05] Ding Atolia: dail one phone is not commonly used
[20:06] Ruby Lysios: in the discussion, his son "joined" before was asked the question?
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: was the quik reponse
[20:06] Ding Atolia: a few spell mistakes
[20:06] Susie223 Chun: quick
[20:06] Jessie Passerine: discussion group his son jioned before
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: before he was asked the question
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: jion??
[20:07] Jessie Passerine: haha.. join..
[20:07] Susie223 Chun 大喊: after being told by a friend that his father was searching him online.
[20:08] Susie223 Chun: searching for
[20:08] Ding Atolia: i think the story is too simple
[20:08] Jessie Passerine: why are you shouting..
[20:08] Ding Atolia: maybe as an exchange student yourself
[20:09] Ding Atolia: you can talk more about your self-feeling when you experienced the earthquake
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: maybe i would like to know more details
[20:09] Ding Atolia: and whether your parents worry a lot
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: the missing child's feeling
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: I don't know why is the character shouting
[20:10] Ding Atolia: then go further to talk more on space and relationship: though we are far away from home, our parents are always concerned about us
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: maybe I pressed something
[20:10] Jessie Passerine: ding ,in news the writer does not talk about him or herself.
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: haha...
[20:10] Ruby Lysios: dinf is missing home
[20:11] Ruby Lysios: ding
[20:11] Ding Atolia: ok, not herself, but as a group of exchange student
[20:11] Susie223 Chun: I agreed with J
[20:11] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:11] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[20:11] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[20:11] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... F.
[20:12] Jessie Passerine: maybe i'll add a few comments from other people
[20:12] Ruby Lysios: “No one got hurt here.”was the quik reponse quick response
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: that's would be better
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: add some coments
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: comments
[20:13] Susie223 Chun: I have figured out that just now,haha
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: haha..
[20:13] Jessie Passerine: my spellings..
[20:13] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:13] Ruby Lysios: ha
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: so ,the story should be more detalied>?
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: detailed?
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: do you parents also use qq??
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: that's cool
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:14] Ding Atolia: haha
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: yes they both do
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: they also use facebook
[20:14] Jessie Passerine: cool!
[20:14] Susie223 Chun: and douban
[20:14] Ruby Lysios: really!!!
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: to see what am I doing everyday
[20:15] Ruby Lysios: ok
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: and when do I go to bed everyday
[20:15] Susie223 Chun: in case I sleep too late,haha
[20:15] Jessie Passerine: what about your parents ruby?
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: they can't use computer....
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: my dad's job has no relation to computers
[20:16] Ruby Lysios: and he doesn't want to learn
[20:17] Ruby Lysios: he just watches tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: o, hehe
[20:17] Ding Atolia: i like watch tv
[20:17] Ding Atolia: too
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: well,that's normal
[20:17] Susie223 Chun: my parents are unnormal XD
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: s, do you feel under great pressure because of theri supervision?
[20:18] Jessie Passerine: their
[20:19] Ruby Lysios: hi, ta
[20:19] JTA Karsin: hey
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: sometimes a little bit
[20:19] Susie223 Chun: hi~
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: hey~
[20:20] Ding Atolia: hi
[20:20] JTA Karsin: something wrong?
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: we have finished,I think
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: no~
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: jes
[20:20] JTA Karsin: oh ok haha
[20:20] JTA Karsin: Hey!
[20:20] Susie223 Chun: what else are we supposed todo?
[20:20] Ruby Lysios: ask TA
[20:20] Jessie Passerine: what should we do now?
[20:21] JTA Karsin: you finished your discussion?
[20:21] Susie223 Chun: yes
[20:21] Ruby Lysios: almost
[20:21] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:21] Lucky Board: This prize wasn't claimed... so let's try a new magic letter.
[20:21] Lucky Board: Next Prize: breeding coop
[20:21] Lucky Board: Looking for a winner whose name begins with.... O.
[20:21] Susie223 Chun: TA?
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: can we leave earlier, haha
[20:22] JTA Karsin: i guess if the discussion is over you can go now
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: oh yeah!!!
[20:22] JTA Karsin: but remember to mail emma your transcript
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: great
[20:22] JTA Karsin: hey wait
[20:22] Ruby Lysios: okok
[20:22] Jessie Passerine: ok
[20:22] Susie223 Chun: ok
[20:22] Ding Atolia: ok
G3, the fisrt discussion in SL
News Title:
Ruby Sadness and Sorrow toward New Taiwan Brides; All They Need is Love and Care
Susie Brought by a Draft Resolution
Ding Taiwan Touches My Heart
Jessie Parent in Mailand searching for “Missing” child in Taiwan Online after earthquake
[2010/03/09 19:47] Susie223 Chun: so ,Ruby,what story did you write?[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: yes
[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: about belnuts girls
[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: can you say your topic again[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: I mean,a detailed story...[2010/03/09 19:48] Ruby Lysios: ?homesexual and....
[2010/03/09 19:48] Ding Atolia: she wants to hear the details[2010/03/09 19:48] Ding Atolia: haha
[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: many homosexual organizations gathered and protested in front of the Taipei Municipal Government.[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: and the government apologized[2010/03/09 19:49] Jessie Passerine: and what happened next?[2010/03/09 19:49] Ruby Lysios: the girl who sell belnuts to make a living and hope one day she could get into the university
[2010/03/09 19:49] Mi Shinn: if there is no question, then see you next week in class
[2010/03/09 19:49] Ruby Lysios: ok
[2010/03/09 19:49] Ding Atolia: Ok
[2010/03/09 19:50] Jessie Passerine: what should we do next?[2010/03/09 19:50] Ding Atolia: so now we have to post our story?[2010/03/09 19:50] Ruby Lysios: we should put our headlines in the blogger first?
[2010/03/09 19:50] Susie223 Chun: I think so
[2010/03/09 19:50] Ruby Lysios: i am quite sure, maybe i wull change another topic
[2010/03/09 19:50] Ding Atolia: I have put it in my own
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: so did I
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ding Atolia: but i haven't been invited yet
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: i will link to your blogger if i have time[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: how
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: I
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: really?
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: I got one
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: you should tell the teacher[2010/03/09 19:51] Ding Atolia: let me check first
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: so youshould got one,too[2010/03/09 19:52] Ruby Lysios: yes
[2010/03/09 19:52] Ruby Lysios: this is my msn r2955@yahoo.com.tw you can add me
[2010/03/09 19:52] Susie223 Chun: er...what else should we do?[2010/03/09 19:53] Jessie Passerine: **11:00-12:00 Back to Motru1. Students will be divided into small groups and have discussions on the news stories that you have written.2. Take a group picture. Post it to the class blog.
[2010/03/09 19:53] Ruby Lysios: put the headline and our conversation in the personnal and class blog
[2010/03/09 19:53] Ding Atolia: let's take a picture[2010/03/09 19:53] Ruby Lysios: ok
[2010/03/09 19:53] Susie223 Chun: Let's take a picture now,shall we?[2010/03/09 19:54] Ruby Lysios: let laugh together
[2010/03/09 19:54] Susie223 Chun: fine
[2010/03/09 19:54] Ruby Lysios: stand a line or make a circle?[2010/03/09 19:54] Jessie Passerine: come here . the view is better here[2010/03/09 19:55] Susie223 Chun: line,I suppose
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: in line
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: ok
[2010/03/09 19:55] Ruby Lysios: come here
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: sun?
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: wait a second
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: she is stuck
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ruby Lysios: haha
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: yeah, i'm invited
[2010/03/09 19:57] Jessie Passerine: wating for u~ sun
[2010/03/09 19:57] Jessie Passerine: haha~~
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: Hi Jessie
[2010/03/09 19:58] Jessie Passerine: hi
[2010/03/09 19:58] Susie223 Chun: god
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: could you send me a copy of the transcript?
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: I lost mine
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: maybe use the traditional c+p way[2010/03/09 19:59] Jessie Passerine: ok~
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: email me after class
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: thanks
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: see you
[2010/03/09 19:59] Jessie Passerine: see you~
[2010/03/09 19:59] Ding Atolia: see you
[2010/03/09 19:59] Susie223 Chun: see u~
Ruby Sadness and Sorrow toward New Taiwan Brides; All They Need is Love and Care
Susie Brought by a Draft Resolution
Ding Taiwan Touches My Heart
Jessie Parent in Mailand searching for “Missing” child in Taiwan Online after earthquake
[2010/03/09 19:47] Susie223 Chun: so ,Ruby,what story did you write?[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: yes
[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: about belnuts girls
[2010/03/09 19:47] Ruby Lysios: can you say your topic again[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: I mean,a detailed story...[2010/03/09 19:48] Ruby Lysios: ?homesexual and....
[2010/03/09 19:48] Ding Atolia: she wants to hear the details[2010/03/09 19:48] Ding Atolia: haha
[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: many homosexual organizations gathered and protested in front of the Taipei Municipal Government.[2010/03/09 19:48] Susie223 Chun: and the government apologized[2010/03/09 19:49] Jessie Passerine: and what happened next?[2010/03/09 19:49] Ruby Lysios: the girl who sell belnuts to make a living and hope one day she could get into the university
[2010/03/09 19:49] Mi Shinn: if there is no question, then see you next week in class
[2010/03/09 19:49] Ruby Lysios: ok
[2010/03/09 19:49] Ding Atolia: Ok
[2010/03/09 19:50] Jessie Passerine: what should we do next?[2010/03/09 19:50] Ding Atolia: so now we have to post our story?[2010/03/09 19:50] Ruby Lysios: we should put our headlines in the blogger first?
[2010/03/09 19:50] Susie223 Chun: I think so
[2010/03/09 19:50] Ruby Lysios: i am quite sure, maybe i wull change another topic
[2010/03/09 19:50] Ding Atolia: I have put it in my own
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: so did I
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ding Atolia: but i haven't been invited yet
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: i will link to your blogger if i have time[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: how
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: I
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: really?
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: I got one
[2010/03/09 19:51] Ruby Lysios: you should tell the teacher[2010/03/09 19:51] Ding Atolia: let me check first
[2010/03/09 19:51] Susie223 Chun: so youshould got one,too[2010/03/09 19:52] Ruby Lysios: yes
[2010/03/09 19:52] Ruby Lysios: this is my msn r2955@yahoo.com.tw you can add me
[2010/03/09 19:52] Susie223 Chun: er...what else should we do?[2010/03/09 19:53] Jessie Passerine: **11:00-12:00 Back to Motru1. Students will be divided into small groups and have discussions on the news stories that you have written.2. Take a group picture. Post it to the class blog.
[2010/03/09 19:53] Ruby Lysios: put the headline and our conversation in the personnal and class blog
[2010/03/09 19:53] Ding Atolia: let's take a picture[2010/03/09 19:53] Ruby Lysios: ok
[2010/03/09 19:53] Susie223 Chun: Let's take a picture now,shall we?[2010/03/09 19:54] Ruby Lysios: let laugh together
[2010/03/09 19:54] Susie223 Chun: fine
[2010/03/09 19:54] Ruby Lysios: stand a line or make a circle?[2010/03/09 19:54] Jessie Passerine: come here . the view is better here[2010/03/09 19:55] Susie223 Chun: line,I suppose
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: in line
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: ok
[2010/03/09 19:55] Ruby Lysios: come here
[2010/03/09 19:55] Jessie Passerine: sun?
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: wait a second
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: she is stuck
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ruby Lysios: haha
[2010/03/09 19:56] Ding Atolia: yeah, i'm invited
[2010/03/09 19:57] Jessie Passerine: wating for u~ sun
[2010/03/09 19:57] Jessie Passerine: haha~~
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: Hi Jessie
[2010/03/09 19:58] Jessie Passerine: hi
[2010/03/09 19:58] Susie223 Chun: god
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: could you send me a copy of the transcript?
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: I lost mine
[2010/03/09 19:58] Mi Shinn: maybe use the traditional c+p way[2010/03/09 19:59] Jessie Passerine: ok~
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: email me after class
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: thanks
[2010/03/09 19:59] Mi Shinn: see you
[2010/03/09 19:59] Jessie Passerine: see you~
[2010/03/09 19:59] Ding Atolia: see you
[2010/03/09 19:59] Susie223 Chun: see u~
2010年3月9日星期二
Taiwan Touches My Heart
Taiwan Touches My Heart
Sonny Ding （981002902 丁潔瓊）
Having been in Taiwan for over two weeks, I begin to love this place as an old friend and to love these people here as a newcomer. As an exchange student from Nanjing University, I am overjoyed to know the fact that my university used to be named as the National Central University, where I’m now, with less than four mouths’ time left. Thus, I view the campus as an old and intimate friend; as for the people here, their overwhelming kindness and hospitality have enabled me, a newcomer, to better identify with this place.
I was mostly impressed by what happened this Saturday morning in front of the Office of the President, Taiwan. When we were about to leave the sightseeing place, it was noon. Hot and hungry, we wanted to arrive at any nearby restaurant as soon as possible. Just as we were wandering along the street, looking for an eating place, three mid-aged women sitting under a big tree saw us and one of them came towards us with a bag in her hand. Approaching us, she filled her hands with candies and Taiwan Jujube and then handed them to each of us. “You must be from the mainland for your accents are not local, so enjoy some of our sweet fruits in this hot weather.” Her words were simple, but her sincerity is profound. I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body, the former for bringing a breeze in that burning weather, and the latter for bringing a comfort for my homesick heart.
This kind of stories never ceased to happen since the day I came to this beautiful island. The dogs running or lying on campus; the little squirrel enjoying eating under a little pine tree; the helpful and friendly teachers and students… all these images distract me from the thought that I’m so far away from home. All these stories actually tell me one point as the song goes that “Taiwan will touch your heart”. Yes, it touches my heart and I’m embracing it with my soul.
Sonny Ding （981002902 丁潔瓊）
Having been in Taiwan for over two weeks, I begin to love this place as an old friend and to love these people here as a newcomer. As an exchange student from Nanjing University, I am overjoyed to know the fact that my university used to be named as the National Central University, where I’m now, with less than four mouths’ time left. Thus, I view the campus as an old and intimate friend; as for the people here, their overwhelming kindness and hospitality have enabled me, a newcomer, to better identify with this place.
I was mostly impressed by what happened this Saturday morning in front of the Office of the President, Taiwan. When we were about to leave the sightseeing place, it was noon. Hot and hungry, we wanted to arrive at any nearby restaurant as soon as possible. Just as we were wandering along the street, looking for an eating place, three mid-aged women sitting under a big tree saw us and one of them came towards us with a bag in her hand. Approaching us, she filled her hands with candies and Taiwan Jujube and then handed them to each of us. “You must be from the mainland for your accents are not local, so enjoy some of our sweet fruits in this hot weather.” Her words were simple, but her sincerity is profound. I felt an overwhelming stream of both coolness and warmth running over my body, the former for bringing a breeze in that burning weather, and the latter for bringing a comfort for my homesick heart.
This kind of stories never ceased to happen since the day I came to this beautiful island. The dogs running or lying on campus; the little squirrel enjoying eating under a little pine tree; the helpful and friendly teachers and students… all these images distract me from the thought that I’m so far away from home. All these stories actually tell me one point as the song goes that “Taiwan will touch your heart”. Yes, it touches my heart and I’m embracing it with my soul.
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